Tuesday classes 12:30 and 4:00

Hey guys, I have sent emails and posted announcements in Blackboard letting you all know that I am unable to be in class on Tuesday for either section. I have been called to court. I have left instructions in the email and announcements.

Please respond to me via email and let me know that you have received this information. This ONLY concerns the Tuesday classes. We will resume as usual on Thursday.

Thanks,
Brandy Reincke

Persuasive speech questions

Please consider the following questions when choosing your topic and developing your speech:

1. What is your stake? audience?

2. 3 main ideas: support?

3. Sources???

4. Consider the "other side"

Due in 2 weeks (11/29)

Please bring a TYPED rough outline to class.

The outline should follow the original template:

Intro: attention getter, preview (ALSO ESTABLISH CREDIBILITY)

Body: three main points with supporting material (Label the proofs as they apply in parenthesis after the point)

For instance: ex: A. Cost effectiveness of not eating meat (logos)

Conclusion: restate the specific purpose (point and three main areas)

Also, cite your sources at the bottom of your outline and how they would apply

YOU MUST HAVE THIS COMPLETED AND WITH YOU 11/29 IN ORDER TO MEET WITH ME AND RECEIVE ANY FEEDBACK!! IN ADDITION ALL TOPICS MUST BE APPROVED!!!!!!

Reminder/ Rule of thumb: If you use internet sources, check to make sure the sites you get your information from ends in edu, org, or gov.

ONE SOURCE MUST BE FROM THE LIBRARY AND USED FOR THE SPEECH.

Finally, make sure that your powerpoints are 3-5 slides with sources cited. (LESS IS MORE when it comes to Powerpoints)

4-7 minute speeches

Final exam

For the final exam, you be writing an essay. This essay will respond to the following three questions. You MUST use evidence from the text, your speeches, and the class in general to answer these questions.

1. What is included in the proper outline format? Why is each area important and necessary?

2. What were three areas that you struggled with delivering your speeches? How did you resolve or at least attempt to resolve them?

3. List five possible times in your life that you may be asked to speak publicly. What will you take from this course that will aid you in being successful in these situations?

Persuasive Speech

Persuasive Speech
Persuasive speeches are used to influence the audience to alter a behavior, attitude or belief.
Persuasive speeches aim to influence an audience by causing change in the ways they think, feel, act or believe. This influence can also reinforce existing positions.

2.The three pillars of proof:

A. ethos: credibility (trustworthy, committed, and knowledgeable)
a. initial credibility: expertise realized by presence before speech
("You're reputation proceeds you")
b. derived credibility: credibilty gained in addition to initial credibility during speech
( culmination of speech attributes: points, organization, tone, support)
c. terminal credibility: credibility at result of the speech
( combination of initial and derived credibililty- overall opinion of speaker's credibility)

B. pathos: emotional appeal (emotional stories or reasoning for beliefs, attitudes, and/ or actions)(senses- language)

C. logos: logical appeal (rational proof or arument with factual reasoning)
a. inductive reasoning: specific to broad ( make point than give reasoning)
b. deductive reasoning: broad to specific ( lead up to point with reasoning)

Ideal Organization

A. intro: capture attention, thesis statement, establish credibility, and preview speech
B. body: internal summaries of main points, smooth transitions
C. conclusion: summarize main points, strong closing statement, clincher
Here are a couple of things to keep in mind when formatting your persuasive speech.
1. Make sure that your outline and therefore your speech is either inductive or deductive. (Yes, you have to turn in your outline prior to giving the speech. Highlight your main persuasive idea.)2. I will be looking for examples of ethos (credibility), pathos (emotional appeal), and logos (logical reasoning) in your speech and outline. You will demonstrate these proofs in your content, posture/ appearance, and speaking.
3. Remember that persuading does not necessarily mean changing minds. Persuading can mean enhancing present ideas or perhaps introducing a new way to look at something. Remember: "Breakfast Club as a cultural film".
4. Practice your speech. Try to avoid the "ums" and "likes". Make sure that you capture your audience. Stay within the time limits of 4- 7 min. I will cut you off.
5. Make sure that you have an introduction and a conclusion. Everyone must have a powerpoint. (KEEP IT CLEAN)


You must create a powerpoint and conduct research. You must have three academic or reliable sources for this speech and at least one must be from the Ivy Tech library.
Persuasive Speech Rubric
Outline (20) ____________ (complete, turned in on time, followed, time)
Topic (5) _______________ (limited, appeals to audience)
Intro (15)_______________ (attention getter, establish credibility)
Body (30)_______________ (proofs, transitions, 3main points, organization I/D, effective, responsible)
Presence (35)____________ (nervous energy, confidence, vocal and physical qualities, reading, murmur)
Conclusion (15)____________( highlights main ideas, final thought)
Sources (30) _____________(3 sources, required- not, credible, powerpoint, v/a)
One example would be taking two comparative commercials with like products and discussing the more creative, influential, and overall better commercial. For instance, I could compare car insurance ads. Progressive has the woman in the “white” or virtual store while Allstate has a guy that embodies the “vehicle and the driver” that he represents. I could research the marketing and target audiences, policies, and overall success for my speech. My emotional appeal would be the helpful woman vs. the comical man and how the ads make me feel. My credibility would come from my research and my background in media studies. Finally, my logical reasoning would include financial statistics, focus group analysis, and more effective ad.
Now, this is just an example. You will need these parts, but you will need to develop your speech in accordance to you!!

Impromptu Speech

Impromptu Speech: 50 points
This is an extemporaneous speech. You will be given a list of topics and a limited time to prepare. The speech will be based on your existing knowledge on the subject. You will construct an outline and give your speech “off the cuff” if you will.

We will use this site to prepare:
http://www.speech-topics-help.com/impromptu-speech-topics.html


Here are some of the considerations you will use:

• That will demonstrate your expertise.
• That is related to the purpose of the meeting.
• You feel most confident about.
• You like to talk about.
• You can speak off the cuff within one to five minutes.

Here are some questions that will help you develop your speech.

• What's the purpose of the meeting?
• What exactly is going to happen?
• What do I think of it?
• What is my opinion? Do I like it or not?
• What are the latest news, trends, problems, policy issues

We will review possible scenarios in class.

Rubric: 50 points

25- delivery
25- development/ preparation

These speeches will be the week of Nov. 8-10 in class. We will discuss them in class next week (Nov. 1-3)

Informative Speech rubric

Informative speech rubric
Informative Speech with Research Evaluation Sheet

Speaker_______________________ Topic_____________________ Time_______



Outline:

____/10 Organization
All parts of the outline are clear/present: yes/no/marginal

____/10 Content
Sources: both/ cited (orally)
Presentation of main ideas: logical/ adequate/ confusing
____/ 10 VA
Meet the required slides (3-5)
Content amount and presentation: logical/ appropriate/ distracting- confusing

Speech:

____/10 Introduction

Thesis: clear/marginal/not clear/none
Preview: of Main Points well organized/weak/none

____/20 Body
Transitions: smooth/adequate/weak or not enough or none
Main ideas: well-supported/adequate/weak
Research Citations: spoken/none strong/adequate/weak

____/10 Conclusion
Summary: strong/adequate/weak/none
Final impression: strong/adequate/weak/none

____/30 Delivery average of two points each
Rate: normal/fast/slow Volume: normal/loud/soft
Eye Contact: consistent/sometimes/never
Enthusiasm: above average/adequate/lacking/none
Facial Expressions: appropriate/average/deadpan
Gestures: Natural/mechanical/distracting/lacking/none
Articulation: good/adequate/weak
Pronunciation: good/adequate/weak
Vocal Pauses: None/few/many
Tone/vocal variety: appropriate/marginal/monotone
Word choice: clear/specific/marginal/inappropriate
Dress/Grooming: appropriate/needs improvement/inappropriate

100 Total Score:

Important notice!!

Reminders:

Next week in class we are presenting Informative Speeches!!

1. You must have your topic approved prior to day of class at 11:59 pm est.!!!
2. You must be prepared with powerpoint and outline!!
3. You must be in class as we are working in pairs.

You will NOT be permitted to give your speech unless these items are completed!!!

Considerations

Please consider the following when developing your speech.

1. audience appeal
2. pattern- organizational patters
3. appropriate visual aids
4. effective sources
5. Purposes: general- specific


I should be able to identify these areas in your outline!!!

Here's an idea!!

I just wanted to give you an idea for informative speeches!! If you would like, you can adapt your midterm papers into informative speeches and discuss them in class. You will have to do some tweaking, but I think that this may actually save time!! I will make some suggestions in class next week!!

Informative speech info!!

Informative Speech:
For the informative speech, you will choose a topic and give a 4-6 minute speech. This speech must follow the original outline format :
Intro: attention getter, preview
Three main ideas with proper citations from three reliable sources (one is from the library)
Conclusion: summary, lasting thought
You must have a powerpoint with 3-5 slides
The outline and powerpoint should include citations and be in a KEYWORD format. You may have 3 cue cards with keyword notes only!!
All topics must be approved. If they are questionable, I may request an outline before approving topic. YOU WILL NOT GIVE SPEECH WITHOUT TOPIC APPROVAL!!!!!

Rubric: 100 points for speech, 50 points for reflection activity
Speech:
20- outline/ organization
10- introduction
30- Body (three main ideas+citations)
10- conclusion
30- delivery
Reflection:
20- peer review
20- self reflection
10- synthesis

Chapter 15 and 16 study guide

Chapter 15
Delivery: Aristotle claimed that “the battle should be fought out on the facts of the case alone; and therefore everything outside the direct proof is really superfluous.”

Content and delivery
Nonverbal communication factors: eye contact, posture, vocal quality, facial expression
Nonverbal- expectancy theory: states that if a listener expects you to have effective delivery, if your delivery is poor, you will lose credibility.
Good speech= effective speech= good delivery
Formal vs. informal tone and audience consideration
Methods of delivery: manuscript (reading), memorized, impromptu (informal), extemporaneous (outline)

Characteristics of delivery:
eye contact (credibility, priority, inclusion)
gestures (cultural expectations, inappropriate, functions, effectiveness)
movement (purposeful, physical barriers, immediacy, transitions)
posture
facial expressions
vocal variety (volume, articulation, dialect, rate, pause)
appearance

Audience :
Ethnocentricism, dramaticism, consult eachother, immediacy monitoring, emotional awareness, verbal/nonverbal codes

Delivery: rest, review, and arrive early

Chapter 16
Visual aids:
Functions:
Enhance understanding, enhance memory, help organize ideas for listeners, gain and maintain attention, illustrate sequences
Types:
Three dimensional (objects, models, people)
Two dimensional (drawings, photos, slides, maps, graphs, charts, chalkboards/whiteboards, overhead)
Computer: powerpoint, images, words, charts, graphs
A/V: DVDs, videotapes, audio
Development Guidelines:
Time awareness, visual awareness, simplicity, related elements, consistent themes, template care
Considerations: audience, speech objective, personal skill and experience

Delivery Guidelines:
Avoid illegal aids, rehearse, make eye contact with audience not aid, Explain aids, and do not pass around objects, use handouts effectively, use aids to control speech, use tech effectively, Murphy’s Law

this is weird

Attention Patrick from Thursday class> I think I have your book. Meet me at 803 in Student Life on Tuesday and I will have it for you!!! Please email me when you read this to confirm.

breincke@ivytech.edu

Midterm clarification

I wanted to offer a few ideas for possible concepts you may use in your analysis.

Perhaps you can see the evolution of complexity in the speech. For instance, if it is a political speech concerning the deficit. This content may be simple to complex is style.

Second, problem- solution organization. For instance, an environmental speech may focus on the depletion of the ozone and possible actions to resolve the issue.

Third, perhaps you recognize the transitions that are mentioned in the book such as; furthermore, next, following etc. Make sure if you choose this kind of concept, you use more than one instance of transitioning.

Fourth, maybe the speaker uses an analogy, example, anecdote or story, or illustration. This would be a good area to recognize.

Finally, maybe your discuss the oral citations the speaker uses when referencing sources they use to make their points.

I hope this helps to clarify the expectations. Make sure to write a paragraph for each concept you use.

Email me with any issues.

Here is the study guide for chapters 10-14

Chapter 10
Organizing your speech:
Main Ideas:
Topical: equally important main pts., any order
---Primacy: most important/ convincing point first and so on (stem cell benefits)
---Recency: most memorable point last and least memorable first (living arrange. benefits)
---Complexity: simple to complex (health plans)
Chronological: organization of time (ipod develop.)
Inductive (specific to general) deductive (general to specific)
How to…beginning to end structure (front to back)
Back in time: end to beginning (back to front)
Spatial: direction based on organization (land forms)
Cause and Effect: cause—effect
Problem and Solution: problem solving
Solution and Problem: defining and proving the problem

Support:
Note: subdividing your main ideas: This pattern does not have to follow the main ideas pattern
Integrating your supporting materials: word processing, note cards, photocopies
Primacy (importance)
Recency (memorable)
Specificity (specific vs. general),
Complexity (simple to complex)
Soft to hard evidence (opinion vs. fact)

Transitions:
Verbal: in addition, not only, furthermore, in other words, in summary, therefore…
Nonverbal: facial expression, pause, altered pitch, movement
Previews: initial, internal
Summaries: final, internal


Chapter 11
Introductions:
Purposes:
gain attention, offer reason to listen, introduce subject, establish credibility, preview main points
Effective Intros:
Illustrations, anecdotes, quotes, humor, questions
References: historical or current events, personal, occasion, preceding speeches

Chapter 12
Conclusions:
Purposes:
Summarize, reemphasize central point, restate main ideas, provide closure, motivate audience response
Effective conclusions:
Illustrations, anecdotes, facts and stats, quotes, humor, questions
Reference intro, inspirational appeals or challenges

Chapter 13
Outline and Editing:
Rough outline: complete, standard, brainstorm bubbles

Rules of thumb:
standard roman numeral and lettering
at least two subdivisions, no more than four (ideally three)
Indent main ideas, subpoints
Add introduction and conclusion

Editing:
Review :
your purpose (three main ideas)
consider audience (what do they NEED to hear?)
simply say it (eliminate unnecessary phrases, do not narrate yourself or criticize or apologize)
slim down your support (keep only what is NEEDED!!)
get help (have someone listen and offer help on edits)
review intro and conclusion (10 percent at either end)
Outlines should be brief: keyword
Intro and Conclusions in shorthand
Do not include your thesis in your delivery outline (cue cards)

Chapter 14
Oral vs. Written:
Oral is personal, less formal, more repetitive
Effective wording:
Specific, concrete, simple, clearly, appropriate, unbiased,
Adapting to diverse audiences:
Ethnic vernacular (hybrid language: spanglish)
Regionalisms (specific language to region)
Jargon (specific to situation)
Standard
Crafting sentence structure:
Figurative (metaphors/similes)
Personification (human traits to inhumane objects)
Drama (omission, inversion, suspension)
Cadence (rhythm): repetition, parallelism (similar grammar), antithesis (opposition), alliteration (repetition of consonants)

Special Occasion speech: Oct 11-13

Special Occasion Speech
This is a speech of your choosing where you will create a speech based on the occasion. This speech can be fabricated or true to life. You must adapt your speech to the original outline format and include any included sources. You will have 3-5 minutes for this speech. You must create and perform this speech. Prior to giving the speech, you must set up the mood and describe the occasion. (hint: this should be the introduction!!)
Two major differences with this speech will be with the preview / summary and powerpoint. Some speeches may not need or work with these structures attributes. However, you will need an introduction and conclusion. You will need a powerpoint for this speech, however, it may serve more as a backdrop and visual support rather than an aide for your speech. You can have a minimum of one slide, two if you are citing sources.
Please see me if you feel that your speech will not follow any of the above structures.
100 points
10- organization: outline format and preparation
5- powerpoint: at least one slide (sources cited, if applicable)
10- introduction: setting the mood, occasion
15- body: three main ideas with proper transitions
10- conclusion: concluding statement and lasting thought
50- delivery: rate and volume, gestures, appearance, eye contact, articulation, practice, enthusiasm, word choice, sincerity, clarity

Midterm: 10/4-6 to10/11-13

Midterm
For this assignment, you will choose a speech either online or in person. This speech must be at least 10 minutes long. You will need to cite specific examples, therefore you will either need to take precise notes or be able to review the speech several times for an accurate analysis.
You must choose FIVE concepts that we have discussed in class from chapters 1-9, 10-14, and/or 17- 20. You will identify these concepts in bold print and give a brief description of the concept based on your understanding from the text with proper page citation and then use the concept to analyze a particular part of the speech. I will want to see why you chose that concept and occurrence in the speech as well as why you feel the speaker used that particular technique or concept.
You may create an essay with an introduction, body and conclusion or State the speech, orator, and where you found the speech- then bullet point your concept analyses followed up with a summary conclusion stating what you learned overall. (DS, 1”margins, etc.)2-3 pages in length, NO LESS!!!Turn in the hard copy in class!! NO LATE PAPERS WILL BE ACCEPTED WITHOUT PROPER DOCUMENTATION!!! IF YOU CHOOSE A SPEECH LESS THAN THE REQUIRED 10 MINUTES, YOU MUST CHECK WITH ME BEFORE USING IT!!!
Finally, all papers will need a bibliography or reference page with citations for your speech, the textbook, and any other applicable sources. You must cite the speech!!! I will need to be able to locate the speech!!
Rubric: 100 points
30- format (is your paper typed and formatted appropriately from start to finish)
10- speech choice (does it meet the criteria)
50- content (is your analysis accurate- 10 points for each concept)
10- synthesis ( do I feel that you made the necessary connections in a cohesive manner)

Midterm Notice:

I will be introducing and explaining your midterm reports in class next week. For those of you that would like to get ahead you can start looking for your speech to analyze.

You will be observing a speech for this report either online or in person. You will then be analyzing this speech using specific concepts from the text.

Ideally, you will choose famous or noteworthy speeches that would exemplify the text we have covered in class such as audience analysis and preparation techniques.

Again, we will discuss this further in class next week. You will then have one week to complete the assignment.

Possible Special Occasion speech topics

Workplace reports
Public relation
Toasts
Award Presentations
Award Nominations
Award Acceptances
Keynote Speaking
Commencement
Tribute
Eulogies

and...
Retirement
After dinner
Birthday
Farewell


This speech is similar to the Demo speech in value: 50 points organization and 50 points delivery. The rubric will be very similar as the structure should be formatted the same as the preceding speeches. You will have 3-5 minutes for this speech.

Demo Speech Day

Make sure to have the following when you come up to give your speech:

1. Completed and typed outline: This is a 5-7 minute speech!!
- sources cited
- following assigned format

2. Any visual aides necessary

3. Powerpoint with 3-5 slides: sources cited at the end and around images (flash drive?)

4. 3 cue cards!!

5. Appropriate attire and your confidence!!